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2014-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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I prefer to live in a big city. Because in a big city with a lot of sophisticated and modern building and cultural and leisure facilities to enjoy. People who live in big cities, can meet the diversity person and get diversity experience.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]!   Thanks for this one^^ I sometimes prefer to live in a big city, ang sometimes in a rural area. Peace and quiet is nice, but life will be so boring kkkk See you :) ~Teacher B~ Here are some corrections: I prefer to live in a big city. >> correct :) >> I prefer living in a big city. Because in a big city with a lot of sophisticated and modern building and >> Because there are sophisticated structures and modern buildings in a big city, cultural and leisure facilities to enjoy. >> as well as cultural and leisure facilities to enjoy.People who live in big cities, can meet the diversity person and get diversity experience. >> People who live in big cities experience diversity.

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