homework

Hello Tom!

Happy second day of the week!

How was your day? I am sure that you are really preparing hard for your speech.

I admire you for that. I encourage you to practice it often.

If you have any questions about the corrections, feel free to tell it in class.

Please be mindful of the spelling of the words and proper spacing.^^

I think we are going to practice your speech soon.^^ See you in class.

I really love clown fishes.^^ I am sure, you too!

Teacher Nina

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The first fishes that I had are Clown fish,Tomato clown,Purple goby and Mandarin fish.

>> Correct! (Be mindful of the proper spacing.^^)
The Clown fish is a main caracter of a movie tittled of \"Find the Nimo\"

>> Clown fish is the main character of the movie titled \"Finding Nemo\". (Spelling check: character and finding ^^)
Its tender orange and write stripe is so pretty.

>> Did you mean: Its tender orange and white stripes makes it so pretty.
>> OR: It has a tender orange and white stripes, it is so pretty.
All over the body\'s color is ketchup color is Tomato clown is cute.

>> Did you mean: All over the body of a Tomato clown is similar to the color of a ketchup and it is cute.
Purple goby is so beautiful because its color are cream and purple.

>> Purple Goby is so beautiful because its physical characteristics are cream and purple.

And Mandarin fish is rare because turquise blue,purple and brown is exquisitely mix.

>> Did you mean: And Mandarin fish is rare because of its turquoise blue with mixed brown and purple characteristics.
And Botton coral and Star polyp\'s pink and tender green make beautiful ocean with salt water fishes.

>> Did you mean: And the Botton Coral and Star Polyps is green. It makes the ocean beautiful with salt water fishes.