Homework.

2014-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi, chelsea. Today, my homework topic is "What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?" Korean men think that friendship is very important. I also agree like that. I was originally from Busan, but i moved to seoul when i was 20 years old, then i live there for 6 years. I was lonely, i miss my friend and my home. My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. so Fighting! It was a really big power to me! Um... I will do my best for our class tomorrow. I will prepare a little bit more. kkk Goodnight teacher. bye ~

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 Hi! It\'s the second day of the week! Three more days to go!...KKK   Anyway, I agree with your answer. Great and you explained well. Good job! Keep on verbalizing your thoughts. You are on the right track!   Rest well tonight and a great day tomorrow!   T. Chelsea^^   Hi, chelsea. >>Hi, Chelsea.Today, my homework topic is \"What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?\">>Today, my homework\'s topic is \"What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?\" Korean men think that friendship is very important. >> Korean men think friendship is very important. I also agree like that.>>I also agree with that.I was originally from Busan, but i moved to seoul when i was 20 years old, then i live there for 6 years.>>I was originally born in Busan, but I moved to Seoul when I was 20 years old and then I live there for 6 years.I was lonely, i miss my friend and my home. >>I was lonely. I missed my friends and my home.My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. so Fighting!>>My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. So Fighting!It was a really big power to me! >>It gives me courage. >>OR:It makes me brave.Um... I will do my best for our class tomorrow. >>correctI will prepare a little bit more. kkk>>correct Goodnight teacher. bye ~ >>Goodnight teacher. Bye.

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