Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, chelsea.
Today, my homework topic is "What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?"
Korean men think that friendship is very important. I also agree like that.
I was originally from Busan, but i moved to seoul when i was 20 years old, then i live there for 6 years.
I was lonely, i miss my friend and my home.
My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. so Fighting!
It was a really big power to me!
Um... I will do my best for our class tomorrow.
I will prepare a little bit more. kkk
Goodnight teacher. bye ~
강사 첨삭
Hi! It\'s the second day of the week! Three more days to go!...KKK
Anyway, I agree with your answer. Great and you explained well. Good job!
Keep on verbalizing your thoughts. You are on the right track!
Rest well tonight and a great day tomorrow!
T. Chelsea^^
Hi, chelsea.
>>Hi, Chelsea.Today, my homework topic is \"What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?\">>Today, my homework\'s topic is \"What are some ways your best friend has influenced your life in a positive way?\"
Korean men think that friendship is very important.
>> Korean men think friendship is very important.
I also agree like that.>>I also agree with that.I was originally from Busan, but i moved to seoul when i was 20 years old, then i live there for 6 years.>>I was originally born in Busan, but I moved to Seoul when I was 20 years old and then I live there for 6 years.I was lonely, i miss my friend and my home. >>I was lonely. I missed my friends and my home.My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. so Fighting!>>My friends told me that it is the way you are growing. So Fighting!It was a really big power to me!
>>It gives me courage.
>>OR:It makes me brave.Um... I will do my best for our class tomorrow.
>>correctI will prepare a little bit more. kkk>>correct
Goodnight teacher. bye ~
>>Goodnight teacher. Bye.
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