homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Becca.
I'm sorry I missed your call yesterday.
I did not received your call because I continued driving up the phone for personal errand.
Too bad I missed class.
Thank you for your answers and class always friendly.^^
See you evening!
homework
The first reason is that people work need money, also.
And another reason is that the people get the satisfaction of working hard.
When I achieved work my fulfillment is greater.
Thereby I will want more and more hard work.
강사 첨삭
Hello MIss Sally :)
Thanks for sending in your homework today.
It was unusual for you not to answer my calls kkkk
But no worries!
We can always catch up.
Thanks as well for your message.
See you!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
Hello, Becca.
>> correct :)I\'m sorry I missed your call yesterday.
>> correct :)
>> I\'m sorry for not answering your call yesterday.
I did not received your call because I continued driving up the phone for personal errand.
>> I was not able to answer your call because I used my phone to do a personal errand. Too bad I missed class.
>> Too bad, I missed the class.Thank you for your answers and class always friendly.^^>> Thank you for answering my questions and for always making the class friendly. ^^
See you evening!>> See you this evening!homework
>> Here\'s the answer to my homework:The first reason is that people work need money, also.
>> One of the reasons whu people work is money.And another reason is that the people get the satisfaction of working hard.
>> Another reason is the satisfaction that people get from working hard.When I achieved work my fulfillment is greater.
>> Everytime I accomplish my goals at work, my sense of fulfillment becomes greater. Thereby I will want more and more hard work.
>> Therefore, I want to work harder.
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