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Oh!I still remember them clearly. But they died one by one. Because I can't predict their habit and change of life. Tyey always died because of stress,temperature or water qualty. My family always sad and gloomy when they died. And my family make promise that we must pray for the fishes arebear and we must set all of terms for them.

Hello Tom! I am so inspired and taken away by your personality. You are the person who really loves fishes and you always take note of the things needed to be done. I hope that all of the people especially pet lovers are like you. It is really important for us to know the life cycle of our lovely pets. You did a wonderful job in sharing your ideas. Work on your word order and choice of words. You can do it! See you in class!Teacher Nina   Oh!I still remember them clearly. >> Oh! I can still remember them clearly. But they died one by one. >> Correct! Because I can\'t predict their habit and change of life. >> Because I can predict their habits and change of life. >> OR: Because I can predict their habits and how their life changes.>> OR: It is because I can predict their habits and their life cycle. Tyey always died because of stress,temperature or water qualty. >> They always die because of stress, temperature or water quality. >> OR: They lose their lives because of stress, temperature or quality of water. My family always sad and gloomy when they died. >> My family is always sad and gloomy when they die.And my family make promise that we must pray for the fishes arebear and we must set all of terms for them. >> Did you mean: And my family made a promise that we will pray for th fishes and set all of the terms of living for them.   >> OR: And my family made a promise that we will pray for th fishes and set all of the things needed by them.