Homework

Hi there! :)

I hope you have rested now. I think you really need it so that you will not get sick in the near future. And nowadays, it\'s difficult when we get sick. Many things and people will be affected right? So you should take care of yourself.

As for our homework, you are actually right. Even here in our country, there are a lot of career women. And sometimes, women work better than men. :) But of course, it still depends on the job that they are doing. So in one of your sentences, I removed the word increasingly because you already used the word stronger. And stronger is the word stronger is actually in the comparative form wherein it shows that women today also have the same responsibilities as men. If you have anymore questions, just fee free to ask me in class. :)

Rest well tonight. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. :)

Good night. :)

T. Chelsea ^^

Hi, Chelsea.

>> Hi Chelsea. [Don\'t place any punctuation marks between your greeting and the name of the person you are greeting.]

Today, I\'m sleepy all day because I stay at all night yesterday. :(
>> I feel sleepy all day because I stayed up all night yesterday.

My homework\'s topic is \"In your country are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to their families?\"...
Wow. It is too long.
>> Wow, it is long. [You can combine these two sentences.]

Originally, The responsibilities of a father was stronger than the responsibilities of a mother in Korea.

>> Originally, the responsibilities of a father is stronger than the responsibilites of a mother in Korea.
However, Today, Ther are similar because recently the power of women is increasingly getting stronger in Community.
>> However, today they are similar because the power of women are getting stronger in th community.

I think there are many people that awesome career women in community. like you :)
>> I think there are a lot of career women in our country just like you.

Um... Actually, I\'m doing my homework in company with secret. kkk
>> Actually, I\'m secretly doing my homework in the company.
I will go to home.

>> I will be going home now.
I\'m so sleepy.

>> correct :)

See you tomorrow.

>> correct :)
Bye~