Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Well, of course, we have to be thankful of everything that we have in our life.
Even the smallest things that we have, we still have to be thankful about it.
Anyway, thanks for today and see you this Friday!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What are you most grateful for?
I\'m in the my classroom.
>> I\'m in my classroom.
It\'s nine thirty now.
>> correct!
I am supposed to send teaching plan tomorrow so I had finished it until now.
>> I am supposed to send my teaching plan (lesson plan) tomorrow so I have to finish it until now.
I\'m tired but happy.
>> correct!
I\'m grateful healthy body because I can live and do all something.
>> I\'m grateful of having a healthy body I can live doing all things.
It is my pleasure.
>> correct!
>> or: It gives me pleasure.
I can\'t help thanking all of things everyday.
>> I can\'t help not to thank all these things everyday.
I think it is a miracle but the problem is forgetting.
>> I think it is a miracle but the problem is being so forgetful.
I forget precious things such as health, family, friends, work(job) and so son.
>> correct!
I\'m not sick so I can do anything.
>> correct!
The point of view is important.
>> correct!
So I\'d like to have positive thinking.
>> correct!
Sometime I complain about something.
>> I sometimes complain about something.
Actually it is natural but I want to remember that my life is just a miracle.
>> correct!
Maybe, everything is grateful at this moment. kkk
>> correct!
I became sentimental thanks to deep night. Hahaha,
>> correct!
Good night. See you next morning.
>> correct!
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