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2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Composition: What are you most grateful for? It's a little difficult to answer. There are lots of things that I am grateful for in the world. I try to thank for everything around me. For example, air, water, earth, light, and so on. Because of these things, I would live. Hi Kathrine~ On monday, what did you study? I could't listen caferfully. Good night. See you tomorrow~ bye~

강사 첨삭

Great noon Mr. [이름]!

Well, I studied one of my law subjects last Monday.
It is about Taxation Law.

Sooooo difficult.

I have my final examination this week and it will end today so this week is a very hard week for me.

Anyway, thanks answering your homework.
See you again tomorrow!

And not worry Mr. [이름], you are a nice guy. Okay?

I believe you. \",)


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Composition: What are you most grateful for?

It\'s a little difficult to answer.

>> correct!

There are lots of things that I am grateful for in the world.

>> correct!

 I try to thank for everything around me.

>> I am trying to thank everything which is around me.

For example, air, water, earth, light, and so on.

>> correct!

Because of these things, I would live.
>> Because of these things, I am alive now.
Hi Kathrine~

>> correct!
 On monday, what did you study? 

>> correct! 

>> or: What did you study last Monday?
 I could\'t listen caferfully. 

>> correct! 

>> or: I was not able to listen carefully.
 Good night.

>> correct! 
 See you tomorrow~ bye~

>> correct! 

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