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Until now, there were many corals and fishes who live in my fish tank. First, for the salt water fishes, Royal dotiback,Yellow wrasse,Clocky clown fish,Yellow watchman,Golden head boby,Rockbleny,Green cromis and the others. For the corals, lader coral,Blue mushroom,Green mushroom,Botton,Green star polyp,Clam,Sea apple,Bubble and the others. As time goes by,my fish tank become a stable and make a environment that the fishes and corals live comfortably._to be continue_

Good Thursday to you Tom! It is already the fifth part of your speech. Great! I appreciate your great interest in composing sentences. Keep it up! I suddenly want to see your fish tank again. Hahaha! I know that your fish tank is really beautiful and colorful.^^ How many clown fishes do you have? Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, feel free to tell it in class. See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina   Until now, there were many corals and fishes who live in my fish tank. >> Until now, there are many corals and fishes who live in my fish tank. >> OR: I have a lot of corals and fishes in my fish tank.First, for the salt water fishes, Royal dotiback,Yellow wrasse,Clocky clown fish,Yellow watchman,Golden head boby,Rockbleny,Green cromis and the others. >> First, for the salt water fishes they are named: Royal dotiback, Yellow wrasse, Clocky clown fish, Yellow watchman, Golden head boby, Rockbleny, Green cromis and a lot more. For the corals, lader coral,Blue mushroom,Green mushroom,Botton,Green star polyp,Clam,Sea apple,Bubble and the others. >> For the corals they are called: Lader coral, Blue mushroom, Green mushroom, Botton, Green star polyp, Clam, Sea apple, Bubble and many more. As time goes by,my fish tank become a stable and make a environment that the fishes and corals live comfortably. >> As time goes by, my fish tank is becoming more stable. The fishes and corals live comfortably in it. >> OR: As time passes by, the fishes and corals are comfortable living in my fish tank because it is more stable now. _to be continue_ >> To be continued.