Homework:)
학생이 쓴 원문
To me, making a time table never works to manage my time.
When I make my time table, I tend to divide my time into minutes which makes my timetable too tight.
And I think there is no one except machines who can follow the time table I made.
Also, I feel frustrated when I fall behind the plans.
So making a time table isn't effective for me to manage my time.
However instead of a time table, I usually make 'To do list' .
I make my 'To do list' day by day which includes checking the correction you send me and writing the composition.
When I erase one of the list , I feel proud of myself at that moment.
And when I erase all the things I should do, then I start to feel more comfortable and take some rest.
Through a time table or a to do list, I can spend my day more practically but I like days that doesn't let me make my to do list. Because sometimes I overly stick to my to do list, so it adds more stress on me.
Days without worry, how wonderful that is!! kkk
I miss my winter vacation.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] my dear~~
Wow!! I was really entertained reading your composition. kkk
It felt like you were just beside me narrating your stories.
That feeling would only mean that you\'re really good in expressing your thoughts through writing.
Keep up the good work and never stop learning for more.
I\'ll look forward to talking with you again next week.
Happy Cheesecake day for you on Sunday!! Kindly greet your brother a happy birthday too for me.. kkk
Have a happy Friday!!
T.Kristel-
To me, making a time table never works to manage my time.
>> CORRECT!!When I make my time table, I tend to divide my time into minutes which makes my timetable too tight.
>> CORRECT!!And I think there is no one except machines who can follow the time table I made.
>> CORRECT!!Also, I feel frustrated when I fall behind the plans.
>> CORRECT!!So making a time table isn\'t effective for me to manage my time.
>> CORRECT!!However instead of a time table, I usually make \'To do list\' .
>> However instead of a time table, I usually make a \'To do list\' .I make my \'To do list\' day by day which includes checking the correction you send me and writing the composition.
>> CORRECT!!When I erase one of the list , I feel proud of myself at that moment.
>> When I erase one of those in the list , I feel proud of myself at that moment.
And when I erase all the things I should do, then I start to feel more comfortable and take some rest.
>> CORRECT!!Through a time table or a to do list, I can spend my day more practically but I like days that doesn\'t let me make my to do list.
>> CORRECT!!
Because sometimes I overly stick to my to do list, so it adds more stress on me.
>> CORRECT!!Days without worry, how wonderful that is!! kkk
>> CORRECT!!I miss my winter vacation.
>> CORRECT!!
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