Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Emily!^.^
While I was reading your homework, I was reminiscing the time when I was at my 23rd year.
However, I can\'t really remember that time anymore!^,^
Maybe because I am already too old like a grandmother (lola)!~~
But I will try to remember that if I have more time to think.
And by the way, I want to thank you for the compliment!^,^ kkk
I hope I can see your picture, too!^.^
Have a great weekend and I will call you on Monday. I do hope you are not drunk at that time. kkk..^.^
~~Teacher Erine~~
What age would you want to remain for the duration of your life?
- I want to stay 23years old.
>>I want to stay at the age of 23 years old.
23 is not too old and not too young.
>>Correct.
This age can get any job without any limit of age.
>>At this age, anybody can get any job without thinking of the age limit.
And I think most woman is the most pretty in their life when they are 23years old.
>>And I think most women are at their prettiest stage of their life at their 23rd year.
Then after 23years old, they become getting old.
>>Then after 23 years old, they will get old/they are becoming older.
I heard this one from many people but I didn\'t believe it when I was young.
>>Correct.
But after I pass this age, I can agree with them.
>>But after I passed this age, I can agree with them.
I feel I am getting old after 23 years old.
>>Correct.
- I saw your picture.
>>Correct.
haha I think it looks better than before.
>>Correct.(*Thank you!!!^^)
I realized that you guys wear same blouse.
>>I realized that you guys wear the same blouse.(*No, we didn\'t wear the same blouse!~ Check the pictures with people wearing a white blouse, those are the new pictures!^.^)
hehe I hope I can see your new video soon~!! :)
>>Correct.(*I wouldn\'t like to hear this sentence anymore. TT.TT)
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