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2014-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. It's shining Today. I'm very happy today because whether is sooooooo nice and today is Friday. Today my homework's topic is "What is your biggest goal in life?" I think my biggest goal is that get to master degree in the UK. Even though the goal is decide six months ago, I recently most to excite and interesting. It is just like adventure! I need the high English skills and a lot of money for that. I will more gather hard ! Have you ever been experienced that live another country? Do you think that It will be fun? I'm looking foward that.(<- this meaning is "I'm so expected". right?) Today is Friday. Enjoy your weekend. Firing weekend !! Bye Bye. See you on monday.

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Hi there Luke! Yeah, it really is a nice day today because it\'s Friday and the weather here in the Philippines is also nice! I haven\'t experienced living in another country yet but it has always been my dream to work and live in another country. I\'m sure that you are very excited already. I\'m pretty sure you\'ll have fun, meet a lot of friends and most important thing is that you will learn a lot of things. It might be difficult at first but I think, we need to go through a lot of stuffs, to get to the places we want to be. You are very lucky because you know your goal in life, so just keep on persuing them. Anyway, I made some correstions and I hope I was able to meet your points. See you on Monday! Enjoy the rest of your day and take care! Have a great weekend^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea. >> Hi Chelsea!It\'s shining Today. >> CORRECT^^ I\'m very happy today because whether is sooooooo nice and today is Friday.>> I\'m very happy today because the weather is so nice and today is Friday.Today my homework\'s topic is \"What is your biggest goal in life?\">> CORRECT!I think my biggest goal is that get to master degree in the UK.>> I think my biggest goal is to get a masters degree in the UK.Even though the goal is decide six months ago, I recently most to excite and interesting. It is just like adventure! >> Even though that goal was decided six months ago, I am very excited and interested. It\'s just like an adventure!I need the high English skills and a lot of money for that. I will more gather hard !>> I need to be fluent in English and a lot of money for that. I will earn much money!Have you ever been experienced that live another country? >> Have you ever experiences living in another country?Do you think that It will be fun? >> CORRECT^^I\'m looking foward that.(<- this meaning is \"I\'m so expected\". right?)>> I\'m looking forward to that. (This means \'I\'m so excited\' right?)Today is Friday. Enjoy your weekend. Firing weekend !!>> CORRECT^^Bye Bye. See you on monday. >> CORRECT^^

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