homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there again Mr. [이름]! :)
Thank you for granting my request that you sing for me.. kkkk
I actually know the song because I have listened to it many times.
I love also the movie Frozen and I love the songs too.
I can sing one song for you too. hahahaha.
Anyway, thank you for your encouragement.
I will really to my best to get good grades.
Well, we have tuna festival in the tuna capital of the Philippines.
It is in General Santos City. I haven\'t been there actually.
But whenever I see it on TV, it looks like a lot of people are having fun and eating lots of tunas for free. kkk
Wanna go there?
Hope you will enjoy your free time after work this weekend.
Please od not drink.
See you then!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Composition: If you opened a restaurant, what kind of food would you serve?
I sometimes think that I open my restrurant.
>> I am sometimes thinking about opening my own restaurant.
When I was a university student, I did work in part-time jobs.
>> When I was a university student, I had some part-time jobs.
Especially, I worked in different restaurant and learned several knowledges.
>> I especially worked in different restaurants and I learned a lot things.
I like to cook and often make a special dish.
>> correct!
If I opened my restaurant, I would serve a sliced raw tuna restaurant.
>> If I will open my restaurant, I would like to serve a sliced raw tuna.
I love tuna best with drink.
>> I love tuna and it\'s the best while drinking.
Just it is my thought.
>> It is just my thought.
Hi Kathrine~
>> correct!
On phone conversation, for the first time I sang for someone. Let it go~
>> On our phone conversation, it is my first time to sing for someone the song \"Let it go\".
>> or:
I sorry that I don\'t know its lyrics well.
>> correct!
>> or: I\'m sorry that I don\'t know
You are studying law subjects.
>> correct!
I have once studied law subjets for exams.
>> correct!
It is logical and rational but it is too difficult to study.
>> correct!
I hope that you study so hard that you can get a good grade.
>> correct!
Good luck to you~
>> correct!
Enjoy a happy weekend.
>> correct!
See you next week. Bye~~
>> correct!
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