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2011-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. Some people think cats are mysterious pet because a legend said cats have 7 life. 2. Cats are like to climb something so sometime cupboard is dirty. 3. When I couldn't find cat I look on the cabinet and cat was on there. 4. When someone stand idly he/she is thinking nother thing. 5. My fish breed very well so now I have 50~70 fishes. 6. My brother isn't shy so he sing very well in front of the people. 7. My brother's talent is marvelous because he can do many thing.(Example : sing, playing piano, playing violin, playing harmonica, ect)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Another great job from you. Press forward. I'm just here to guide you in your. English learning journey. See you later!  -Verna-   1. Some people think cats are mtsterious pet because they think cat have 7 life.>>Some people think cats are mysterious pets because they think cats have 7 lives. 2. Cats are like to climb something so sometime cupboard is dirty.>> Cats like to climb to climb on the cupboard to get something so it is sometimes dirty.3. When I couldn't find cat I look on the cabinet and cat was on there.>>When I couldn't find the cat I look for it on the cabinet and the cat was there.4. When someone stand idly he/she is thinking about another thing.>>Correct5. My fish breed very well so now I have 50~70 fish.>>Correct6. My brother isn't shy so he sing very well in front of the people.>>My brother isn't shy so he sings very well in front of many people.7. My brother's talent is marvelous because he can do many thing.(Example : sing, playing piano, playing violin, playing harmonica, ect) >>My brother's talents are marvelous because he can do many things.(Example : singing, playing the piano, playing violin,and playing harmonica, ect)

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