homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Some people think cats are mysterious pet because a legend said cats have 7 life.
2. Cats are like to climb something so sometime cupboard is dirty.
3. When I couldn't find cat I look on the cabinet and cat was on there.
4. When someone stand idly he/she is thinking nother thing.
5. My fish breed very well so now I have 50~70 fishes.
6. My brother isn't shy so he sing very well in front of the people.
7. My brother's talent is marvelous because he can do many thing.(Example : sing, playing piano, playing violin, playing harmonica, ect)
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1. Some people think cats are mtsterious pet because they think cat have 7 life.>>Some people think cats are mysterious pets because they think cats have 7 lives.
2. Cats are like to climb something so sometime cupboard is dirty.>> Cats like to climb to climb on the cupboard to get something so it is sometimes dirty.3. When I couldn't find cat I look on the cabinet and cat was on there.>>When I couldn't find the cat I look for it on the cabinet and the cat was there.4. When someone stand idly he/she is thinking about another thing.>>Correct5. My fish breed very well so now I have 50~70 fish.>>Correct6. My brother isn't shy so he sing very well in front of the people.>>My brother isn't shy so he sings very well in front of many people.7. My brother's talent is marvelous because he can do many thing.(Example : sing, playing piano, playing violin, playing harmonica, ect)
>>My brother's talents are marvelous because he can do many things.(Example : singing, playing the piano, playing violin,and playing harmonica, ect)
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