Homework

2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Kristel ! Today, you made me so sad.. Do you remember I told that “Are you leaving Power English?” when you brought up this issue at the first time? At the end, I guess your surprise exactly.. I wished it’s not true. Anyway, I hope that you could enjoy your life fully with pleasures wherever you are. Hmmm.. I think this is the right time to push myself a bit too hard. When I have to say goodbye with people, I always push myself not to be depressed so hard. Because it could be some kind of burden to them if I feel sad about their leaving so badly. It seems that some sad farewells also charge big part of our lives. I think that is the reason why the word Goodbye consists of the word Good and Bye. So we should make “good” farewells. In the future, I will have to let more and more people go and this truth makes me so gloomy, but I know it is necessary to learn how to send someone off well. Thank you and I’m looking forward to hearing you again. :-)

강사 첨삭

My dearest [이름]!! I am very sorry that I had to break the news that way last Friday. I was just really left without a choice but to tell you about it since I wasn\'t sure if I would still be talking to you for the following days or not anymore. I know you were sad because I felt it when we were talking. In fact, it was a relief for me that our time was already over then before I burst into tears. I was really holding my tears back. It was hard! I didn\'t even realize that saying good bye to people who I never actually know personally would be so difficult. It was heart breaking. We\'ve talked for a considerable amount of time and we\'ve shared so much that I felt we\'re friends not actually in a teacher-student relationship. I will never forget you, my dear! I wish you all the happiness in life! But anyhow, if you want to keep in touch with me as a friend not a teacher anymore especially when you\'re in France, just leave your contact details here, it might be an email or an ID. :) I am looking forward to hearing from you again too. :) Have a happy Monday~~~ T.Kristel- Hi, Kristel ! >> CORRECT!!Today, you made me so sad.. >> CORRECT!!Do you remember I told that “Are you leaving Power English?” when you brought up this issue at the first time? >> Do you remember when I asked you, \"Are you leaving Power English?\" when you brought up this issue before?At the end, I guess your surprise exactly.. >> So I was right after all.I wished it’s not true. >> I just wished it wan\'t true.Anyway, I hope that you could enjoy your life fully with pleasures wherever you are. >> CORRECT!!Hmmm.. I think this is the right time to push myself a bit too hard. >> CORRECT!!When I have to say goodbye with people, I always push myself not to be depressed so hard. >> Whenever I have to say goodbye to people, I always push myself not to be depressed so hard.Because it could be some kind of burden to them if I feel sad about their leaving so badly. >> Because it could be some kind of a burden to them if I feel sad badly about them leaving.It seems that some sad farewells also charge big part of our lives. >> It seems that some sad farewells also charge a big part of our lives. I think that is the reason why the word Goodbye consists of the word Good and Bye. >> CORRECT!!So we should make “good” farewells. >> CORRECT!!In the future, I will have to let more and more people go and this truth makes me so gloomy, but I know it is necessary to learn how to send someone off well. >> CORRECT!!Thank you and I’m looking forward to hearing you again. :-) >>  Thank you and I\'m looking forward to hearing from you again. :-)

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·