homework

A fun Friday to you Tom!

Wow! I really want to see your fish tank.

You did a good job. I haven\'t seen a Caren Angel yet.
I think it looks amazing! You were able to express your ideas well in writing!

Keep it up! However, be careful with your verb tenses and use pronouns too.

Please go over the corrections below. See you in class.
What are your plans for this weekend? I hope that you will have fun.

Teacher Nina

These are sensitive.

>> These fishes are sensitive.

>> OR: These fishes are too sensitive.

So they can\'t bear a little stress.

>> So, they can bear even a bit of stress.
But my fish tank is stable.

>> Correct

So, they live longer then before there are Caren Angel who has tender blue color and white strip,

>> So they live longer than before. There are fishes called Caren Angel, it is blue and has white stripes.

>> OR: So, their life span is longer than before. There are fishes called Caren Angel, it is blue and has white stripes.

Fox face who has a yellow color and black border around a eyes,sea starfish,and a pair of clown fish couple that I breed two years ago,

>> Did you mean: A fox face that is yellow and has a black border line around its eyes. Se starfish and a pair of clown fish that I have been breeding for two years now.

a Mushroom coral coral who has tender green flower,Sun polyp and pipe organ coral.

>> I also have a mushroom coral which has a green flower, sun polyp and pipe organ coral.

>> OR: I also have a sun polyp, mushroom coral which has a green flower and lastly a pipe organ coral.