Homework;)
학생이 쓴 원문
The best dream that I've had so far was to meet my favotite girl group at that time.
At that time, I liked a girl group called 'FINKL'. And that was the time when I was six years old.
In fact, I could remember my childhood since I was six.
I was in a space where everything seemed white.
Without thinking, I just walked forward. Then a white door appeared in front of me.
So I opened it. As I opened the door, I could see that FINKL was performing on a stage.
But where I came out was also on the stage. So I felt really happy but also awkward.
Also, there was a dream that continued.
On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early. But I still tired so I went back to back right away.
And surprisingly, the dream I had before continued.
Bye:) Have a great weekend Kristel;)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
Your story here is quite interesting..kkk
Anyway, do you believe that dreams have meanings in them?
Please check the corrections I made for you here!
Have a happy Monday~~
T.Kristel-
The best dream that I\'ve had so far was to meet my favotite girl group at that time.
>> The best dream that I\'ve had so far was meeting my favotite girl group at that time.At that time, I liked a girl group called \'FINKL\'. And that was the time when I was six years old.
>> At that time, I was six and I liked the girl group called \"FINKL\".In fact, I could remember my childhood since I was six.
>> Actually, I could remember my childhood since I was six.I was in a space where everything seemed white.
>> CORRECT!!Without thinking, I just walked forward. Then a white door appeared in front of me.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!So I opened it. As I opened the door, I could see that FINKL was performing on a stage.
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!But where I came out was also on the stage. So I felt really happy but also awkward.
>> But I also came out on the stage so I felt happy but awkward at the same time.Also, there was a dream that continued.
>> I also had a dream that was continued.On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early. But I still tired so I went back to back right away.
>> On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early but I was still tired so I went back to bed right away.And surprisingly, the dream I had before continued.
>> Surprisingly, my dream was continued.Bye:) Have a great weekend Kristel;)
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
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