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2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

The best dream that I've had so far was to meet my favotite girl group at that time. At that time, I liked a girl group called 'FINKL'. And that was the time when I was six years old. In fact, I could remember my childhood since I was six. I was in a space where everything seemed white. Without thinking, I just walked forward. Then a white door appeared in front of me. So I opened it. As I opened the door, I could see that FINKL was performing on a stage. But where I came out was also on the stage. So I felt really happy but also awkward. Also, there was a dream that continued. On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early. But I still tired so I went back to back right away. And surprisingly, the dream I had before continued. Bye:) Have a great weekend Kristel;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! Your story here is quite interesting..kkk Anyway, do you believe that dreams have meanings in them? Please check the corrections I made for you here! Have a happy Monday~~ T.Kristel- The best dream that I\'ve had so far was to meet my favotite girl group at that time. >> The best dream that I\'ve had so far was meeting my favotite girl group at that time.At that time, I liked a girl group called \'FINKL\'. And that was the time when I was six years old. >> At that time, I was six and I liked the girl group called \"FINKL\".In fact, I could remember my childhood since I was six. >> Actually, I could remember my childhood since I was six.I was in a space where everything seemed white. >> CORRECT!!Without thinking, I just walked forward. Then a white door appeared in front of me. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!So I opened it. As I opened the door, I could see that FINKL was performing on a stage. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!But where I came out was also on the stage. So I felt really happy but also awkward. >> But I also came out on the stage so I felt happy but awkward at the same time.Also, there was a dream that continued. >> I also had a dream that was continued.On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early. But I still tired so I went back to back right away. >>  On Sunday morning, I had a dream so I woke up early but I was still tired so I went back to bed right away.And surprisingly, the dream I had before continued. >> Surprisingly, my dream was continued.Bye:) Have a great weekend Kristel;) >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!

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