Homework
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Great afternoon Ms. [Name]
Well, it looks like you want a restaurant which offers healthy food for those who want to have a diet. kkk
It could be possible.
Many people would want to eat healthy food nowadays.
Maybe when you retire, you have a sideline like this. Why not?
See you again tomorrow Ms. [Name]
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
My husband went to Seoul to visit the dentist so I stay at home alone.
>> My husband went to Seoul to visit the dentist so I stayed at home alone.
I considered to go there with him but I know that I need to take a rest for me.
>> I considered going there with him but I know that I need to take a rest.
It was good choice.
>> It was a good choice
I didn\'t eat delicious food during weekend but I had a great time.
>> I didn\'t eat delicious food during the weekend but I had a great time.
I went to public bath, library and park so I read a book and watched a movie.
>> I went to the public bath, to the library and at the park, so I read a book and I watched a movie.
The movie title was \'Take me home\'.
>> correct!
>> or: the title of the movie is \"Take me home.\"
It has a great secene and story.
>> It has a great scene and story.
Especailly the direct was main character in this movie.
>> Especially, the director was the main character in the movie.
He looks really nice. kkk.
>> correct!
I ate sweet photato for three meals.
>> I ate sweet potato for my 3 meals.
I love to eat it.
>> correct!
I alos had fruit such as apple and strawberry.
>> I also had fruits such as apple and strawberry.
I\'d like to eat bread but I refrain.
>> I\'d like to eat bread but I refrained myself.
what kind of food would you serve?
I want to serve various begetable.
>> correct! (spelling correction-vegetable)
I make special salad that is made of fresh begetable, sweet fruit and nuts.
>> I will make a special salad which is made out of fresh vegetables and nuts.
The sauce is important.
>> correct!
I will selcet sweet and light one.
>> I will select the sweet and light one.
I also cook with bean.
>> I will also cook with some beans.
Tobu is made of bean.
>> Tobu is made of out of bean.
I\'d like to make various food with tobu.
>> correct!
Have ever eaten bean meat.
>> Have you ever eaten some bean meat?
It is not meat but the taste is like meat.
>> ikt is not a meat but it tastes like meat.
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