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2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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My husband went to Seoul to visit the dentist so I stay at home alone. I considered to go there with him but I know that I need to take a rest for me. It was good choice. I didn't eat delicious food during weekend but I had a great time. I went to public bath, library and park so I read a book and watched a movie. The movie title was 'Take me home'. It has a great secene and story. Especailly the direct was main character in this movie. He looks really nice. kkk. I ate sweet photato for three meals. I love to eat it. I alos had fruit such as apple and strawberry. I'd like to eat bread but I refrain. If you opened a restaurant, what kind of food would you serve? I want to serve various begetable. I make special salad that is made of fresh begetable, sweet fruit and nuts. The sauce is important. I will selcet sweet and light one. I also cook with bean. Tobu is made of bean. I'd like to make various food with tobu. Have ever eaten bean meat. It is not meat but the taste is like meat.

강사 첨삭

Great afternoon Ms. [Name]

Well, it looks like you want a restaurant which offers healthy food for those who want to have a diet. kkk

It could be possible.

Many people would want to eat healthy food nowadays.

Maybe when you retire, you have a sideline like this. Why not?
See you again tomorrow Ms. [Name]

Enjoy the rest of the day!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



My husband went to Seoul to visit the dentist so I stay at home alone.

>>  My husband went to Seoul to visit the dentist so I stayed at home alone.

I considered to go there with him but I know that I need to take a rest for me.

>>  I considered going there with him but I know that I need to take a rest.

It was good choice.

>>  It was a good choice

I didn\'t eat delicious food during weekend but I had a great time.

>>  I didn\'t eat delicious food during the weekend but I had a great time.

 I went to public bath, library and park so I read a book and watched a movie.

>>  I went to the public bath, to the library and at the park, so I read a book and I watched  a movie.

The movie title was \'Take me home\'.

>>  correct!

>> or: the title of the movie is \"Take me home.\"

It has a great secene and story.

>> It has a great scene and story.

Especailly the direct was main character in this movie.

>> Especially, the director was the main character in the movie.

He looks really nice. kkk.

>>  correct!

I ate sweet photato for three meals.

>>  I ate sweet potato for my 3 meals.

I love to eat it.

>>   correct!

 I alos had fruit such as apple and strawberry.

>>  I also had fruits such as apple and strawberry.

 I\'d like to eat bread but I refrain. 

>>  I\'d like to eat bread but I refrained myself.
what kind of food would you serve?
I want to serve various begetable.

>>  correct! (spelling correction-vegetable)

I make special salad that is made of fresh begetable, sweet fruit and nuts.

>>  I will make  a special salad which is made out of fresh vegetables and  nuts.

The sauce is important.

>>  correct!

I will selcet sweet and light one.

>>  I will select the sweet and light one.

I also cook with bean.

>>  I will also cook with some beans.

Tobu is made of bean.

>>  Tobu is made of out of bean.

I\'d like to make various food with tobu.

>>  correct!

Have ever eaten bean meat.

>>  Have you ever eaten some bean meat?

It is not meat but the taste is like meat.

>>  ikt is not a meat but it tastes like meat.

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