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2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Composition: Does telling a white lie make you a bad person? I think it is wrong. Only truth doesn't satisfy everybody. A white lie sometimes satisfies ones. If we knew all fact and its cause, we might be tired too much. So we need a white lie for everybody's peace. I think it doesn't make person bad. Hi Kathrine~ Do you have a happy weekend? I saw the 3D version of the movie FROZEN. It's very fantastic. Its a cubic effect and sound are worderful! I would like to recommend it aggresively. Enjoy the rest of today~ See you tomorrow~ Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]!

It\'s good to hear that you had a good weekend.

Well, I had a good one too.

I also watched some movies.
Although it is not 3D. kkkk.

I watched the movies \'About Time\", \'12 Years of Slave\", \'Dallas Buyers Club\', \'Magic Mike\', and \'Cutting Edge\'

All movies are in different genre.

I also cooked dinner for my sister and my friend last Saturday.

They enjoyed the dish that I have cooked. hahaha.

Anyway, see you again tomorrow.
Have a great day ahead Mr. [이름]!

Take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



Composition: Does telling a white lie make you a bad person?

I think it is wrong. 

>>  correct!
 Only truth doesn\'t satisfy everybody.

>>  correct! 
 A white lie sometimes satisfies ones.

>>  A white lie sometimes satisfies one person only.
 If we knew all fact and its cause, we might be tired too much.

>>  If we know all the fact and its cause, we might get tired too much.
 So we need a white lie for everybody\'s peace.

>>  correct!
 I think it doesn\'t make person bad.
>>  correct!
Hi Kathrine~

>>  correct! 
 Do you have a happy weekend?

>>  Did you have a happy weekend?
 I saw the 3D version of the movie FROZEN.

>>  correct! 
 It\'s very fantastic.

>>  correct! 
 Its a cubic effect and sound are worderful!

>>  It has a cubic effect and the sound is wonderful.
 I would like to recommend it aggresively.

>>  I would like to recommend it strongly. 

>> or: I would strongly recommend it.
 Enjoy the rest of today~

>>  Enjoy the rets of the day!
 See you tomorrow~ Bye~

>> correct!

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