homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]!
It\'s good to hear that you had a good weekend.
Well, I had a good one too.
I also watched some movies.
Although it is not 3D. kkkk.
I watched the movies \'About Time\", \'12 Years of Slave\", \'Dallas Buyers Club\', \'Magic Mike\', and \'Cutting Edge\'
All movies are in different genre.
I also cooked dinner for my sister and my friend last Saturday.
They enjoyed the dish that I have cooked. hahaha.
Anyway, see you again tomorrow.
Have a great day ahead Mr. [이름]!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Composition: Does telling a white lie make you a bad person?
I think it is wrong.
>> correct!
Only truth doesn\'t satisfy everybody.
>> correct!
A white lie sometimes satisfies ones.
>> A white lie sometimes satisfies one person only.
If we knew all fact and its cause, we might be tired too much.
>> If we know all the fact and its cause, we might get tired too much.
So we need a white lie for everybody\'s peace.
>> correct!
I think it doesn\'t make person bad.
>> correct!
Hi Kathrine~
>> correct!
Do you have a happy weekend?
>> Did you have a happy weekend?
I saw the 3D version of the movie FROZEN.
>> correct!
It\'s very fantastic.
>> correct!
Its a cubic effect and sound are worderful!
>> It has a cubic effect and the sound is wonderful.
I would like to recommend it aggresively.
>> I would like to recommend it strongly.
>> or: I would strongly recommend it.
Enjoy the rest of today~
>> Enjoy the rets of the day!
See you tomorrow~ Bye~
>> correct!
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