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2014-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Does telling a white lie make you a bad person? It is difficult to tell that all lie is wrong. For example, when I go home, my mother ask me 'Do you have a lunch?'. Although I didn't eat it, I say 'Yes, I do.' This is because my mother worry about that. However, when I was young, some teacher taught me that we have to tell only truth. In this situation, I can tell 'No, I didn't yet but do not worry and I'm not hungry. I think the latter is better but sometime I tell a white lie because it is easy. When I speak in English, the misunderstanding occure avoidably. I may can't tell something exactly. A white lie make me social person when I can tell such as 'you look beautiful!'. Depending on situation, we have to take care of using a white lie.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
I do agree with what you have said.
Not all lies are bad and telling that we are also bad.
We do white lies as it depends on the situation that we are in.
But telling bad lies every time which is not really proper will make us a bad person.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion about our topic.

See you again next time!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


Does telling a white lie make you a bad person?


 It is difficult to tell that all lie is wrong.

>> It is difficult to tell that all lies are wrong.

For example, when I go home, my mother ask me \'Do you have a lunch?\'.

>>  For example, when I go home and my mother ask me, \"Did you have your lunch?\"

Although I didn\'t eat it, I say \'Yes, I do.\'

>>  Although I didn\'t have lunch, I answered, \"Yes, I do.\"

This is because my mother worry about that.

>>  This is because my mother would be worried about that.

However, when I was young, some teacher taught me that we have to tell only truth.

>>  However, when I was young, some teachers taught me that we only have to tell the truth.

In this situation, I can tell \'No, I didn\'t yet but do not worry and I\'m not hungry.

>>  correct!

I think the latter is better but sometime I tell a white lie because it is easy.

>>  correct!

 When I speak in English, the misunderstanding occure avoidably.

>>  When I speak in English, a misunderstanding occurs unavoidably.

I may can\'t tell something exactly.

>>  I may not tell something exactly.

A white lie make me social person when I can tell such as \'you look beautiful!\'.

>>  correct!

Depending on situation, we have to take care of using a white lie.

>>  Depending on the situation, we have to take care when using a white lie.

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