Homework.

Hi Chelsea It is begining a new week. Last week gone like a flash. Oh my god~ Anyway today my homework's topic is "Can money buy happiness? Why?" I agree on like that. Money can buy happiness, because people spent a lot of time for make money. The people have to make money for my family, for my childrens, and for myself. Especially In korea, making a lot of money spend a lot of time in company. So if i have a lot of money, i spent a lot of time for my happiness. But, Too much money isn't happiness. because i want to keep of the money, you must be a devil and i'm afraid that disappearing the money. That is broken family just like TV drama story. So, i agree that "Money can buy happiness!" bye bye ~ see you tomorrow

Good afternoon Luke^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ Yes, money is important for us to live but there are some money that cannot buy. I can give you a lot of examples but I will just tell it to you tomorrow! Kkkk Anyway, check those corrections I made and I hope I was able to meet all your points. See you tomorrow^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea >> Hi Chelsea!It is begining a new week. >> It\'s the beginning of a new week. Last week gone like a flash. >> Last week, was gone like a flash. Oh my god~>> CORRECT^^Anyway today my homework\'s topic is \"Can money buy happiness? Why?\">> CORRECT^^I agree on like that. >> I agree on that one. Money can buy happiness, because people spent a lot of time for make money. >> Money can buy happiness because people spent a lot of time earning money. The people have to make money for my family, for my childrens, and for myself. >> People have to earn money for their family, children and for their selves. Especially In korea, making a lot of money spend a lot of time in company. >> Especially in Korea, for them to earn a lot of money, they need to spend a lot of time in their company. So if i have a lot of money, i spent a lot of time for my happiness.>> So if I have a lot of money, I spend a lot of time to be happy.But, Too much money isn\'t happiness. because i want to keep of the money, you must be a devil and i\'m afraid that disappearing the money. >> But too much money isn\'t happiness already because you want to keep all your money, you must be a devil and I\'m afraid that my money will disappear. That is broken family just like TV drama story. >> This is a broken fmaily just like a TV drama story.So, i agree that \"Money can buy happiness!\">> CORRECT^^bye bye ~ see you tomorrow >> correct^^