Homework:)

2014-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Loaning money to a friend is not a very good idea because you may lose your friend because of that. If a friend of yours is someone who borrows your money and pays it back immediately, you might not have money problems that may extend to the relationship problem of you and him/her. But if he/she is the person who doesn't pay it back right away, I think that could be the beginning of breaking relation with him/her. And if it happens again and again, you start to have bad feelings about him and even doubt him. In the end, there may be no choice but to cut relation with him. And I'm someone who always feel awkward to ask friends to pay my money back so it's also always hard to have my money back. Because of this character, I usually try not to lend my money. There is also the saying "Never stand surety for your friends." in Korea. Bye:) See you tommorrow's morning:) And have greaaaaaaat day, Kristel :)!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! You\'ve got a point there not loaning to your friends. Money issues are always complicated whether with friends, family or a stranger. I am just not sure if you\'d agree to this saying, \"Money is the root of all evil\". Anyway, let\'s discuss in the class tomorrow. Please check some corrections I made here my dear~~ Have a nice day and see you! T.Kristel- Loaning money to a friend is not a very good idea because you may lose your friend because of that. >> CORRECT!!If a friend of yours is someone who borrows your money and pays it back immediately, you might not have money problems that may extend to the relationship problem of you and him/her. >> CORRECT!!But if he/she is the person who doesn\'t pay it back right away, I think that could be the beginning of breaking relation with him/her. >> But if he/she is the person who doesn\'t pay it back right away, I think that could be the beginning of breaking the relationship with him/her. And if it happens again and again, you start to have bad feelings about him and even doubt him. >> And if it happens again and again, you start having bad feelings about him and even doubt him.In the end, there may be no choice but to cut relation with him. >>  CORRECT!!>> In the end, you may be left without a choice but to cut relation with him.And I\'m someone who always feel awkward to ask friends to pay my money back so it\'s also always hard to have my money back. >> CORRECT!!  Because of this character, I usually try not to lend my money. >> CORRECT!!There is also the saying \"Never stand surety for your friends.\" in Korea. >> CORRECT!!Bye:) See you tommorrow\'s morning:) >> Bye:) See you tomorrow morning :)And have greaaaaaaat day, Kristel :)!! >> CORRECT!!

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