homework

Jesus was resurrected, I want to make this day as a holiday. Because God raised from the dead for human. The holiday is filled with joy in the streets and to practice the gospel to neighbors.

Hello Miss. [Name]!   Thanks for sending in your homework :) This is a wonderful idea. I think we celebrate this kind of holiday in our country. In April, I think. Anyway, see you in class! ~Teacher B~ Here are some corrections:   Jesus was resurrected, I want to make this day as a holiday. >> If I will be given the chance , I want to make the resurrection of Jesus a holiday.Because God raised from the dead for human. >> Because he rose from the dead for humanity. The holiday is filled with joy in the streets and >> In the said holiday, the streets will be filled with joy, to practice the gospel to neighbors. >> and everyone will share gospel to neoghbors and loved ones.