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2014-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I recieve corals and salt water fishes from my parent When I have something celebrate. They come into the aquarium by the ship from for contry like Floorida. So, the fishes are limit. So, I will breed them as much as possible.

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Hello Tom! A fantastic Tuesday to you! I am sure that you will receive something because you did a great job during the Chinese contest. I admire you for being a great student, a loving son and a responsible pet lover. Wow! I think those fishes are not common, am I right? I know that you can take good care of them.^^ Can\'t wait to hear your ideas. See you in class! Take Care! I just want to ask you, when are we going to practice your speech for next month? You can tell it to me later in class.Teacher Nina   I recieve corals and salt water fishes from my parent When I have something celebrate. >> Did you mean: I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents as a present. >> OR: I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents when I did something great. They come into the aquarium by the ship from for contry like Floorida. >> They are from an aquarium that was shipped from Florida. >> OR: The salt water fishes came from Florida. So, the fishes are limit. >> So, the fishes are limited. So, I will breed them as much as possible. >> Correct >> OR: I will take good care of them.

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