homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I recieve corals and salt water fishes from my parent When I have something celebrate.
They come into the aquarium by the ship from for contry like Floorida.
So, the fishes are limit.
So, I will breed them as much as possible.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
A fantastic Tuesday to you!
I am sure that you will receive something because you did a great job during the Chinese contest.
I admire you for being a great student, a loving son and a responsible pet lover.
Wow! I think those fishes are not common, am I right?
I know that you can take good care of them.^^ Can\'t wait to hear your ideas.
See you in class! Take Care! I just want to ask you, when are we going to practice your speech for next month? You can tell it to me later in class.Teacher Nina
I recieve corals and salt water fishes from my parent When I have something celebrate.
>> Did you mean: I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents as a present.
>> OR: I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents when I did something great. They come into the aquarium by the ship from for contry like Floorida.
>> They are from an aquarium that was shipped from Florida.
>> OR: The salt water fishes came from Florida. So, the fishes are limit.
>> So, the fishes are limited. So, I will breed them as much as possible.
>> Correct
>> OR: I will take good care of them.
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