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2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I think money is the most major reason that people tend to move to other places. When their contracts are finished, the rent may get more expensive or a landlord or a landlady requires more money. If the rent fits to their budget, people have to move other places. And there may be also other reasons that people tend to move. There are some people who are fed up with the same place easily, so they may move to another place. Also, some people like to live near their workplace so everytime they change their job, they also tend to move. And I want to ask you something. If you don't like the way your professor teaches you, what would you do? I'm taking a class that reads 'Lights in August' by William Faulkner in English. It's a really thick book. The professor let some student to present what each chapter's story is about. But when they give a presentation, they say unclear and fast. And the professor talks about the story roughly. I'm worried if I could take the midterm well. Bye;)

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Hello there [이름]!! Thanks for answering this homework well. Please check the corrections I\'ve made here for you. By the way about your question, I think I have already answered that during the class. I\'d like to reiterate once again that you should only focus on your own goal of taking the class and avoid thinking of the distractions like the story of the book itself and the professor so as to continously motivate yourself to attend it. After all you are left without a choice but to finish it this semester...kkk Have a nice day and see you tomorrow! T.Kristel- I think money is the most major reason that people tend to move to other places. >> I think money is the major reason why people tend to move to other places.When their contracts are finished, the rent may get more expensive or a landlord or a landlady requires more money. >> CORRECT!!If the rent fits to their budget, people have to move other places. >> If the rent doesn\'t fit their budget, people have to move.And there may be also other reasons that people tend to move. >> And there might also be other reasons why people tend to move.There are some people who are fed up with the same place easily, so they may move to another place. >> There are some people who are fed up with the same place easily so they move frequently.Also, some people like to live near their workplace so everytime they change their job, they also tend to move. >>  CORRECT!!And I want to ask you something. >> CORRECT!!If you don\'t like the way your professor teaches you, what would you do? >> CORRECT!!I\'m taking a class that reads \'Lights in August\' by William Faulkner in English. >> CORRECT!!It\'s a really thick book. The professor let some student to present what each chapter\'s story is about. >> CORRECT!! The professor lets some students to present what each chapter\'s story is about. >> The professor lets some students to present the summary of each chapter.But when they give a presentation, they say unclear and fast. And the professor talks about the story roughly. >> But when they present, they speak unclearly and fast. CORRECT!!I\'m worried if I could take the midterm well. >> CORRECT!!Bye;) >> CORRECT!!

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