homework
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I think when 20 years old is adult age.
From that age to pay the bus fare is different children and wear free dress.
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Here are some corrections:
I think when 20 years old is adult age.
>> I think 20 years old is the adult age.
>> I think that we will be considered adults at the age of 20.From that age to pay the bus fare is different children and wear free dress.
>> From that age, we are required to pay our own bus fare, and we can wear whatever we want to wear.
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