Homework.

2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Hi Chelsea! To tell the truth, I wrote the memo that we'll talk about our class. I don't know that is a good way. Do you know a better way? Anyway, my homework today is "If I can change the house that I'm living, what do you want? am i collect? Actually, the house that I'm living was build almost 10 years ago. so there is old all of them. I want to change everything to brand-new. Most I want to change is the wall that not soundproof well. I can hear in my room from noises on the first floor. It drives me crazy!! Um.. I will finish it now. See you tomorrow ~ Goodnight Chelsea ~

강사 첨삭

Hi!   I appreciate you for doing your homework today. Yes, let\'s talk about the memo you sent during our class tomorrow. Thank you for sharing your ideas about this topic. I made some corrections and I hope that I was able to get what you really mean.   Enjoy the rest of the day! Keep safe always!   See you tomorrow!   Teacher Chelsea.       Hi Chelsea!To tell the truth, I wrote the memo that we\'ll talk about our class. >> To tell you the truth, I wrote a memo and we\'ll talk about it during our class.I don\'t know that is a good way. Do you know a better way?>> I don\'t know how to say it in a better way, do you know how to? Anyway, my homework today is \"If I can change the house that I\'m living, what do you want? am i collect?>> Anyway, is my homework today about the change I want to do with the house that Im currently staying in?Actually, the house that I\'m living was build almost 10 years ago. so there is old all of them. I want to change everything to brand-new. >> I\'m currently living in a house which was built 10 years ago so it is already old. I want renovate everything in the house to make it look new. Most I want to change is the wall that not soundproof well. I can hear in my room from noises on the first floor. It drives me crazy!!>> Most of all, I want to change the wall into a soundproof one because I can hear the noise coming from the first floor. It drives me crazy!Um.. I will finish it now.>> I will finish it now.See you tomorrow ~ Goodnight Chelsea ~ >> See you tomorrow. Goodnight Chelsea.

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