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I always first talk to my fishes and say "Hello" Then, my feeling is peaceful. It help me to become a biologist. Because,biologist should have mind to love all living things. I have a dream to have a big fish tank and breed a lot of corals and fishes when I become adult.

Good Wednesday to you Tom! Wow! That\'s so sweet of you! I am sure that you will be a successful Biologist someday. You should always keep an eye on your goal and think about your future. Thank you for being a wonderful person and a great student to me.I am so blessed to have you as my student. Dream big and aim higher! See you in class! Please go over the corrections below. Teacher Nina   I always first talk to my fishes and say \"Hello\" >> I always talk to my fishes and say, \"Hello\" first. >> OR: I always talk to my fishes and say, \"Hello\".Then, my feeling is peaceful. >> Then, I feel peaceful. >> OR: And then, I have a peace of mind. It help me to become a biologist. >> It helps me to become a Biologist. >> OR: This trait will help me to become a Biologist. Because,biologist should have mind to love all living things. >> Because a Biologist should love all living things. >> OR: It is because a Biologist should think and love all living things. I have a dream to have a big fish tank and breed a lot of corals and fishes when I become adult. >> I dream to have a big fish tank and breed a lot of corals and fishes when I become adult. >> Better: I want to have a big fish tank, breed a lot of corals and fishes when I grow older.