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2014-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Instead of writing about some usual problems encountered in apartments, I want to write about the movie I saw today. I saw 'Captin America: The winter soldier' which was released today. And it was really fun. While I was watching the movie, there were no moments that I felt boring. Actually I didn't know much about the character Captin America because I didn't see the first movie of Captin America. Also when he appeared in the movie 'Avengers' , he wasn't one of the characters that I look with attention. But now I can underatand why he is one of American heroes. He is awesome just like other heroes. I recommend you to see the movie:). And if you are really going to watch it, please don't leave the seat when the movie is over. There are still two short videoes after the movie fininshed. And there is a suprising news! The second movie of Avengers will be shooted in Korea in April. And I heard a Korean actress was cast by the movie. Bye;) wow it's Thursday;) kkk

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Hello there [이름]!! I was really entertained reading your composition. kkk I really love how you narrate stories because it makes me feel like we\'re just sitting beside each other exchanging stories. I always feel like I am your friend not just your teacher all the time. :) Thanks for all the great moments in class! Have a wonderful Thursday~~ T.Kristel- Instead of writing about some usual problems encountered in apartments, I want to write about the movie I saw today. >> CORRECT!!I saw \'Captin America: The winter soldier\' which was released today. >> CORRECT!! And it was really fun. While I was watching the movie, there were no moments that I felt boring. >> CORRECT!! While watching the movie, I never felt bored.Actually I didn\'t know much about the character Captin America because I didn\'t see the first movie of Captin America. >> CORRECT!!Also when he appeared in the movie \'Avengers\' , he wasn\'t one of the characters that I look with attention. >> Also when he appeared in the movie \'Avengers\' , he wasn\'t one of the characters that I paid attention to.But now I can underatand why he is one of American heroes. He is awesome just like other heroes. >> But now I can underatand why he is one of the American heroes. He is awesome just like the other heroes.I recommend you to see the movie:). And if you are really going to watch it, please don\'t leave the seat when the movie is over. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! There are still two short videoes after the movie fininshed. >>  There are still two short videoes after the movie.And there is a suprising news! The second movie of Avengers will be shooted in Korea in April. >> CORRECT!! The second movie of Avengers will be shoot in Korea in April.And I heard a Korean actress was cast by the movie. >> And I heard that a Korean actress is one of the casts of the movie.Bye;) wow it\'s Thursday;) kkk >> CORRECT!!

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