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2014-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Then, I won't make mistake like they die because I don't know about them. Because I'll be a master. Thank you for listening!

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom! It\'s already the fourth day of the week! Tomorrow will be a burning Friday! Yipee! So, do you have any plans for tomorrow? I think this is the last part of your speech, am I right? I am excited to hear your speech and practice it in class. When will be the competition? You can tell it later in class. See you! Teacher Nina   Then, I won\'t make mistake like they die because I don\'t know about them. >> Did you mean: So, I won\'t make a mistake in order for them to die because I don\'t know a lot of things about it.Because I\'ll be a master. >> Correct >> OR: It is because I will be a master. Thank you for listening! >> Correct >> OR: Thank you for listening to my speech.  

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