homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Then, I won't make mistake like they die because I don't know about them.
Because I'll be a master.
Thank you for listening!
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
It\'s already the fourth day of the week! Tomorrow will be a burning Friday! Yipee!
So, do you have any plans for tomorrow? I think this is the last part of your speech, am I right?
I am excited to hear your speech and practice it in class.
When will be the competition? You can tell it later in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
Then, I won\'t make mistake like they die because I don\'t know about them.
>> Did you mean: So, I won\'t make a mistake in order for them to die because I don\'t know a lot of things about it.Because I\'ll be a master.
>> Correct
>> OR: It is because I will be a master. Thank you for listening!
>> Correct
>> OR: Thank you for listening to my speech.
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