Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
It's getting warm today. so I don't want to work now. kkkk I want to go out.
Today my homework's topic is "Do you think the government should give money to homeless people?"
I'm not agree on that. I think It is not money that they needs. They have to get a job. It is the better way for their.
Makes easy have moneys will be to spend more easy.
I think there are be able to not work some people with ill. but their needs work of easy too.
There are a lot of homeless people in South Korea. They aren't passionate for work. I think the people without work passionate are no chance for everything.
How do you think about this?
Thank you. See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello there! How are you doing today?First, I have to thank you for writing all these down.I also have to thank you for sending it in for correction.If you have some questions, just feel free to raise them in class.I hope you\'ll find time to study the corrections.Always take care and see you in a while!
Teacher Chelsea.
Hi Chelsea.>> Hi Chelsea,It\'s getting warm today. so I don\'t want to work now. kkkk I want to go out.>> It\'s getting warmer today so I don\'t want to work. I want to go out.Today my homework\'s topic is \"Do you think the government should give money to homeless people?\">> Today, my homework\'s topic is \"Do you think the government should give money to homeless people?\"I\'m not agree on that. I think It is not money that they needs. They have to get a job. It is the better way for their.
>> I don\'t agree with that. I don\'t think that they need money. It is better for them to get a job.Makes easy have moneys will be to spend more easy.>> DID YOU MEAN: It is very easy to spend money if you did not work for it.I think there are be able to not work some people with ill. but their needs work of easy too.>> DID YOU MEAN: I think ill people won\'t be able to work but they still need easy jobs.There are a lot of homeless people in South Korea. They aren\'t passionate for work. I think the people without work passionate are no chance for everything.>> There are a lot of homeless people in South Korea. They are not passionate with their work. I think people who are not passionate with their work do not have chance for everything.How do you think about this?>> What do you think about this?Thank you. See you tomorrow.
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