Homework.

2014-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Today, It's a special day called "Family day" so I will go home at 3 p.m. It is soon. I'm happy :) kkk Anyway If I can go back to the past in my life, I'm going to age 14. Becuase I want to study hard English and I want to study abroad when I'm more younger. Although, I should go to my military service when I became 20 ages, I want go back. But, Korean military service is the hell... Korean guys should live there for 2 years. If you can go back to the past in your life, where do you want to? It's shinning day, Enjoy your happy shopping today. kkkk Bye Chelsea. See you on monday.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ You really did great today! There are a lot of situation that I want to go back and change but I think we all go through all this stuff for us to be where we want to be^^ Have a great day and take care^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^Today, It\'s a special day called \"Family day\" so I will go home at 3 p.m. >> Today is a special day called \"Family day\", so I will go home at 3 pm.It is soon. >> It\'s almost 3. I\'m happy :) kkk>> CORRECT^^Anyway If I can go back to the past in my life, I\'m going to age 14. Becuase I want to study hard English and I want to study abroad when I\'m more younger.>> Anyway, If I can go back to my past, I want to go back at the age of 14 because I want to study English and I want to study abroad younger.Although, I should go to my military service when I became 20 ages, I want go back.>> Although, I should join military service at the age of 20. I want to go back.But, Korean military service is the hell... Korean guys should live there for 2 years. >> But Korean military service is like hell. Korean men should live there for 2 years.If you can go back to the past in your life, where do you want to?>> CORRECT^^It\'s shinning day, Enjoy your happy shopping today. kkkk>> correct^^ >> It\'s sunny today. Enjoy your happy shopping today. Kkkk.Bye Chelsea. See you on monday. >> correct^^

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