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Clown fish is the main character of the movie tittled "Finding Nemo" It has a tender orange and white stripes, it is so pretty.All over the body of a Tomato clown is similar to the color of a Ketchup and it is cute. Purple Goby is so beautiful because its physical characteristics are cream and purple.And mandarin fish is rare because of its turquoise blue with mixed brown and purple characteristics. And the botton coral and Star polyps is green. It makes the ocean beautiful with salt water fishes. Oh! I can still remember them clearly. But they died one by one. Because I can predict their habit and change of life. They always die because of stress,temperature or water quality. My family is always sad and gloomy when they die. And my family made a promise that we will pray for the fishes and set all of the terms of living for them. Untilnow, there are many corals and fishes who live in my fish tank. -It is an appendage of an integral part1-

Good afternoon to you Tom! Thank you for sending this in. Happy Friday! You were able to compose a wonderful speech.  It\'s an interesting topic to read. I made the corrections for you below. In writing, you should be careful with the words you use. Some words are used differently when used in a sentence. Try to go over the corrections below and if you have any questions. feel free to ask me in class.  Tom, I want to ask you, is the last sentence of your composition related to your speech? Tell me in class. See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina   Clown fish is the main character of the movie tittled \"Finding Nemo\" >> CorrectIt has a tender orange and white stripes, it is so pretty. >> Correct All over the body of a Tomato clown is similar to the color of a Ketchup and it is cute. >> The whole body of a Tomato clown is similar to the color of a Ketchup and it is cute. Purple Goby is so beautiful because its physical characteristics are cream and purple. >> Purple Goby is so beautiful because of its physical characteristics such as cream and purple. And mandarin fish is rare because of its turquoise blue with mixed brown and purple characteristics. >> Correct And the botton coral and Star polyps is green. >> CorrectIt makes the ocean beautiful with salt water fishes. >> Correct Oh! I can still remember them clearly. >> CorrectBut they died one by one. >> Correct Because I can predict their habit and change of life. >> Did you mean: Because I wasn\'t able to predict their habits and changes in life. >> OR: Because I wasn\'t able to anticipate their habits and how they changes. They always die because of stress,temperature or water quality. >> CorrectMy family is always sad and gloomy when they die. >> Correct>> Better: My family feels sad and gloomy when they die. And my family made a promise that we will pray for the fishes and set all of the terms of living for them. >> CorrectUntilnow, there are many corals and fishes who live in my fish tank. >> Correct>> OR: Until now, there are many corals and fishes who are in my fish tank.-It is an appendage of an integral part1- >> Correct >> OR: It is the appendage of the first integral part.