Homework

2014-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Today, I talked with foreginer to explain the way that open the particular door. I explained the way to open but I couldn't explain fluently. Just I said "press your dormitory ID here and 'like that'." The point is I couldn't say "put the back of your hand." Why didn't I think this sentence? instead, since I talked with foreigners, I get to want to talk with another foreigners in the future! This is good thing, right? <Homework> 2. By tomorrow, the car ____________ answer: b 3. The Picasso painting ____________ by John. answer: a 4. This story _____________ by most students. answer: a 5. The groceries _____________ by my brother into the room. answer: c 6. THe enchiladas _____________ by Juan. answer: a 7. He ______________ to calm down by his brother. answer: b 8. I ____________ by a dog. answer: b 9. The funiture ________________ by the movers. answer: c 10. You ________________ by this city. answer: b

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름].

It is a good thing to know that you were able to talk with a foreigner because this is a privileged for you to know about your skills. It is is a challenge but you can learn from it so that when you meet a foreigner again you can properly express what you want to say. But for that I congratulate you.
Talk to you on Monday!!!
T. Jenny


Today, I talked with foreginer to explain the way that open the particular door.
>>Today, I talked with a foreigner to explain the way how to open a particular door. 
I explained the way to open but I couldn\'t explain fluently.
>>I explained the way how to open the door but I couldn\'t explain fluently.
 Just I said \"press your dormitory ID here and \'like that\'.
>>I just said, \"Press your dormitory ID here and like that.\"
\" The point is I couldn\'t say \"put the back of your hand.
>>\"The point is that, I couldn\'t say it properly, \" Put your hand at the back.\"
\" Why didn\'t I think this sentence? 
>>\"Why didn\'t I think of this sentence?\"
instead, since I talked with foreigners, I get to want to talk with another foreigners in the future! 
>>Since then, I realized that I want to talk with foreigners.
This is good thing, right?
>>This is a good thing, right?

<Homework>

2. By tomorrow, the car ____________
answer: b
>>correct
3. The Picasso painting ____________ by John.
answer: a
>>correct
4. This story _____________ by most students.
answer: a
>>c
5. The groceries _____________ by my brother into the room.
answer: c
>>correct
6. THe enchiladas _____________ by Juan.
answer: a
>>correct
7. He ______________ to calm down by his brother.
answer: b
>>correct
8. I ____________ by a dog.
answer: b
>>correct
9. The funiture ________________ by the movers.
answer: c
>>correct
10. You ________________ by this city.
answer: b
>>correct

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