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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, jane. This is 3rd, cause the computer was down. ㅠ_ㅠ Tell you myself, shortly. My nick name is [이름]. My korea age is 30. I like watch movies, listen to the muzic with drinking in Zazz bar, read books, and go to trip. I was hard as nurse. I never like my job. Just I made money as nurse. Actually I didn't to be. I didn't have a dream. So I want to enjoy something. That's why I learn in English. Later, I'd like to learn in Spanish. They are attractive to me. I hope speak in English very well with native. jane, It was good for our first time class. I think you are good teacher. I expect the class with you. I'll practice everyday. I don't want to give up, again. I'm looking forward to learning from you.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition! It\'s such a pleasure to know that you enjoyed our first class. I hope that you will feel even more comfortable with me. Don\'t hesitate and always do your best because I will always be here to help you. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. We can do it! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ Hi, Jane. >> Correct This is 3rd, cause the computer was down. ㅠ_ㅠ>> I composed this for the third time because my computer was down. Tell you myself, shortly. >> I will tell you about myself briefly. My nickname is [이름]. >> Correct My korea age is 30. >> I am 30 years old in Korean age. I like watch movies, listen to the muzic with drinking in Zazz bar, read books, and go to trip. >> I like watching movies, listening to music while drinking in a jazz bar, reading books, and going on a trip. I was hard as nurse. >> I had a hard time as a nurse. I never like my job. >> Correct Just I made money as nurse. >> I just made money as a nurse. Actually I didn\'t to be. >> Actually, I didn\'t want to become one. I didn\'t have a dream.>> Correct So I want to enjoy something. That\'s why I learn in English. >> I want to enjoy something, that\'s why I\'m learning English. Later, I\'d like to learn in Spanish. >> Later, I\'d like to learn Spanish. They are attractive to me. >> Correct I hope speak in English very well with native. >> I hope to speak English very well with native speakers. jane, It was good for our first time class. >> Jane, our first class was good. I think you are good teacher. >> I think you are a good teacher. I expect the class with you. >> Correct I\'ll practice everyday. >> Correct I don\'t want to give up, again. >> Correct I\'m looking forward to learning from you. >> Correct  

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