Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Great Monday to you.
It is nice to hear your energetic voice today.
Well, your story made me smile.
I hope you can do that one day.
Of course, without any malice since the two of you are already married and both of you have a happy life now.
So both of you can just reminisce the past. kkkk
I am imagining now.
Seems like a movie. haha.
Anyway, thanks for sharing this one.
I enjoyed reading.
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Tell something about a person you would like to meet some day and why.
Well. I can\'t think easily about that.
>> Well, I can\'t think easily about it.
Um.. I\'d like to meet my first lover. Hahaha.
>> correct!
On one fine spring day, I want to meet him.
>> correct!
>> or: On a fine spring day, I want to meet him.
I know he lives in Seoul with pretty woman and cute sun.
>> I know that he lives in Seoul with a pretty woman and a cut son.
>> or: I know that he is living in Seoul with a pretty wife and a cut son.
We met about twenty years ago.
>> We met twenty years ago.
We were high school student and we had meet by ten years ago.
>> We were high school students and we met 10 years ago.
My high school was girl\'s high school but the club was same with him.
>> My high school was a girl\'s high school but we are in the same club.
>> or: My high school was a girl\'s high school but I was in the same club with him.
He bacame a lawyer that was his dream.
>> He became a lawyer as it was his dream.
I wonder how he is living now. kkk.
>> correct!
I think he was just friend because my friends said it was not love but friendship.
>> correct!
We didn\'t have special date.
>> We didn\'t have a special date.
We just exchanged e-mai.
>> We just exchanged e-mails.
we had meet, watched movie and ate dinner three or four times.
>> When we met, we just watched a movie, and ate dinner for 3 or 4 times.
Therefore we can talk in the day of our youth with a smile.
>> Therefore, we can talk for a day about the old times with a smile.
Can I meet him by chance? hahaha.
>> correct!
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