Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Ms. [Name].
Well, there is no wrong or right answer on our topic since it is basically asking your opinion about it.
But what I have induced from your answer is that you missed your time together with your husband which would make you very happy now.
isn\'t it?
I hope I am correct.
Anyway, see you again tomorrow!
Thanks for your time today.
Take care and enjoy your time at work.
See you!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What is missing in your life that would make you very happy?
Well, this question is not easy.
>> correct!
I wonder that I am living well and I don\'t know what I am missing in my life.
>> I wonder if I am living well and I don\'t know what is missing in my life.
Thesedays my husban is very busy so he comes back home late.
>> correct! (husband)
I don\'t miss our own time such as talking, walking, hiking and family worship.
>> I miss our own time together such as talking, walking, hiking, and family worship.
Although we are busy I\'d like to keep important thing, priority.
>> Although we are busy, I\'d like to keep important things as my priority.
I want to make a plan of thd day in the morning so I don\'t want to waste my time.
>> I want to make a plan in the morning today so I don\'t want to waste my time.
I also keep my priority.
>> correct!
Is this be answer the homework? Thank you.
>> Is this the best answer for my homework? Thank you.
See you on Monday.
>> correct!
my condition is not good every Monday morning. Hahaha.
>> correct! (capitalization)
I\'d like to go to bed early.
>> correct!
If I do that I can have a flesh Monday morning. Bye.
>> If I can do that, I will have a fresh Monday morning. Bye!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.