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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What is missing in your life that would make you very happy? Well, this question is not easy. I wonder that I am living well and I don't know what I am missing in my life. Thesedays my husban is very busy so he comes back home late. I don't miss our own time such as talking, walking, hiking and family worship. Although we are busy I'd like to keep important thing, priority. I want to make a plan of thd day in the morning so I don't want to waste my time. I also keep my priority. Is this be answer the homework? Thank you. See you on Monday. my condition is not good every Monday morning. Hahaha. I'd like to go to bed early. If I do that I can have a flesh Monday morning. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Ms. [Name].
Well, there is no wrong or right answer on our topic since it is basically asking your opinion about it.

But what I have induced from your answer is that you missed your time together with your husband which would make you very happy now.

isn\'t it?

 I hope I am correct.
Anyway, see you again tomorrow!

Thanks for your time today.
Take care and enjoy your time at work.

See you!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


What is missing in your life that would make you very happy?


 Well, this question is not easy.

>> correct!

I wonder that I am living well and I don\'t know what I am missing in my life.

>> I wonder if I am living well and I don\'t know what is missing in my life.

Thesedays my husban is very busy so he comes back home late.

>> correct! (husband)

I don\'t miss our own time such as talking, walking, hiking and family worship.

>> I miss our own time together such as talking, walking, hiking, and family worship.

Although we are busy I\'d like to keep important thing, priority.

>> Although we are busy, I\'d like to keep important things as my priority.

I want to make a plan of thd day in the morning so I don\'t want to waste my time.

>> I want to make a plan in the morning today so I don\'t want to waste my time.

I also keep my priority.

>> correct!

 Is this be answer the homework? Thank you.

>> Is this the best answer for my homework? Thank you.

See you on Monday.

>> correct!

my condition is not good every Monday morning. Hahaha.

>> correct! (capitalization)

I\'d like to go to bed early.

>> correct!

If I do that I can have a flesh Monday morning. Bye.

>> If I can do that, I will have a fresh Monday morning. Bye!

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