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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Last Friday, I saw the musical 'Wicked' with my mom and brother. Wicked is a story based on 'The Wizard of OZ'. In the book 'The Wizard of OZ', the green witch is considered as a bad one. But according to 'Wicked', in fact she wasn't a bad witch and was even a friend with the white witch. The musical was great but not as much as I expected. I think that's because I did look forward to seeing it so much. In fact, I downloaded the music of Wicked a month before and kept listening to it since then. I think having too much expectation ruins the fun of enjoying what I like. And here is my opinion about the subject you gave me 'What is the effect of divorce to the couple's family?'. If the couple has children, I think divorce of their parents could be a hurt to children. It's sad that they have to see their parents seperately, not together. So divorce is easier to the couple who doesn't have a child than the couple who have. Bye;) I'm trying to see Monday happy but still sad. Kkk :)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름] my dear!! A pleasant Monday to you~~ Remain positive all the time my dear! Life is too short to cry over spilt milk and be worried about the things that are not within your control. In addition, remember that one\'s happiness sometimes depends on one\'s level of expectation. :) I will surely miss you very much!!! Have a nice day~~ T.Kristel- Last Friday, I saw the musical \'Wicked\' with my mom and brother. >> CORRECT!!Wicked is a story based on \'The Wizard of OZ\'. >> CORRECT!!In the book \'The Wizard of OZ\', the green witch is considered as a bad one. >> CORRECT!!But according to \'Wicked\', in fact she wasn\'t a bad witch and was even a friend with the white witch. >> CORRECT!!The musical was great but not as much as I expected. >> CORRECT!!I think that\'s because I did look forward to seeing it so much. >> CORRECT!!In fact, I downloaded the music of Wicked a month before and kept listening to it since then. >> CORRECT!!I think having too much expectation ruins the fun of enjoying what I like. >> CORRECT!!And here is my opinion about the subject you gave me \'What is the effect of divorce to the couple\'s family?\'. >> CORRECT!!If the couple has children, I think divorce of their parents could be a hurt to children. >>  If the couple has children, I think divorce of their parents could be a big blow to their children.It\'s sad that they have to see their parents seperately, not together. >> CORRECT!!So divorce is easier to the couple who doesn\'t have a child than the couple who have. >>  So divorce is easier to the couple who doesn\'t have a child than the couple who has.Bye;) I\'m trying to see Monday happy but still sad. Kkk :) >> CORRECT!! I\'m trying to look forward to Monday with happiness but I\'m still sad.kkkk

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