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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Is fashion important? Of course. I believe fashion is important regarding expressing manners these days. An appropriate clothes is essential. For example, to participate in business meeting or having an interview, suitable attire is a good way to express eagerness and sincerity to others.Fasion is one way to show people who you are. For me, it's difficult to care about my attire every day actually. However, if there is an important appointment, I do my best to adorn myself.

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 Hello there! How are you doing today?First, I have to thank you for writing all these down.I also have to thank you for sending it in for correction.If you have some questions, just feel free to raise them in class.I hope you\'ll find time to study the corrections.Always take care and see you in a while! Teacher Mona.   Is fashion important?Of course. >>Correct! I believe fashion is important regarding expressing manners these days. >>I believe that fashion is important with regards to expresing manners these days.An appropriate clothes is essential. >>An appropriate cloth is essecntial. For example, to participate in business meeting or having an interview, suitable attire is a good way to express eagerness and sincerity to others. >>For example , to participate in a bujsniess meeting or having an interview,a suitable attire is a good way to express eagerness and sincerity to others. Fasion is one way to show people who you are. >>Fashion is one way to show people who you are.For me, it\'s difficult to care about my attire every day actually. >>Correct! However, if there is an important appointment, I do my best to adorn myself. >>Correct! >> However, if there is an important appointment, I do my best to dress myself up.

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