Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
A TV reporter holds a microphone under your nose and says, "Channel 25 is doing a survey. We'd like to know: What really matters to you?" Write about what really matters to you.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
1. This is a TV live show for amazing person.
2. TV reporter is introducing about me.
3. I am known for improved nose in the world.
4. I have a good sense of smell.
5. Pepole are amazing about me.
6. I enjoyed for them.
7. I have a lot of money for my strenths.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing these sentences. However, I suggest that you write them in a paragraph form to further enhance your writing skill. I know you can do it. Take care always!
T. JanE ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:A TV reporter holds a microphone under your nose and says, \"Channel 25 is doing a survey. We\'d like to know: What really matters to you?\" Write about what really matters to you.---------------------------------------------------------------------------------1. This is a TV live show for amazing person.>> This is a live TV show for an amazing person.
2. TV reporter is introducing about me.>> The TV reporter is introducing me.
3. I am known for improved nose in the world.>> I am known in the world for me improved nose.
4. I have a good sense of smell.>> Correct
5. Pepole are amazing about me.>> People are amazed by me.
6. I enjoyed for them. >> I enjoyed with them.
7. I have a lot of money for my strenths.
>> I have a lot of money and this is my strength.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.