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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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First, for the salt water fishes they are named,Royal dottiback,Yellow wrass,Clocky clown fish,Yellow watchman,Golden head goby,Rockbleny,Green cromis and alot of more. For the corals they are called,Lader coral, Blue mushroom,Green mushroom,Botton, Green star polyp,Clam, Sea apple, Bubble and many more. As time goes by, my fish tank is becoming more stable. The fishes and corals live comfortably in it. These fishes are sesitive. So, they can bear even a bit of stress. But my fish tank is stable. So, they live longer than before. There are fishes called Coren angel, it is blue and has white stripes. A fox face that is yellow and has a black border line around its eyes. Sea starfish and a pair of Clown fish that I have been breeding for two years now. I also have a Sun polyp,Mushroom corals which has a Green flower and lastly a Pipe organ coral. I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents when I did something great. _It is an appendage of an integral part_

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Hello there Tom! Happy Monday! You surprised me! You sent your homework early today.^^ Great! I already made the corrections for you. Hopefully we can practice your speech starting on Wednesday.^^ I am really excited to hear your ideas today. How was your weekend? Did you have enough rest? Can\'t wait to talk to you in class. See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina   First, for the salt water fishes they are named,Royal dottiback,Yellow wrass,Clocky clown fish,Yellow watchman,Golden head goby,Rockbleny,Green cromis and alot of more. >> First, for the salt water fishes they are named Royal Dottiback, Yellow Wrass, Clocky Clown fish, Yellow Watchman, Golden head Gob, Rockbleny, Green cromis and a lot more. ( Be mindful of your proper spacing.^^ ) >> OR: My saltwater fishes are named Royal Dottiback, Yellow Wrass, Clocky Clown fish, Yellow Watchman, Golden head Gob, Rockbleny, Green cromis and a lot more.For the corals they are called,Lader coral, Blue mushroom,Green mushroom,Botton, Green star polyp,Clam, Sea apple, Bubble and many more. >> Correct! ( Be mindful of your proper spacing.^^ )As time goes by, my fish tank is becoming more stable. >> Correct! The fishes and corals live comfortably in it. >> Correct!These fishes are sesitive. >> Correct! ( Spelling check: fishes ^^) So, they can bear even a bit of stress. >> So they can\'t bear even a bit of stress. >> OR: They can\'t handle stress. But my fish tank is stable. >> Correct! So, they live longer than before. >> Correct! >> OR: Their lifespan is longer than before. There are fishes called Coren angel, it is blue and has white stripes. >> Correct! A fox face that is yellow and has a black border line around its eyes. >> Correct! Sea starfish and a pair of Clown fish that I have been breeding for two years now. >> Correct!I also have a Sun polyp,Mushroom corals which has a Green flower and lastly a Pipe organ coral. >> Correct! ( Be mindful of your proper spacing.^^ )I receive corals and salt water fishes from my parents when I did something great. >> Correct!

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