Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Well, I guess you should keep the letters since those things are precious and could not be given away.
And you can let your future children read them.
Just give away those clothes and other things because they can still be changed by other things.
Thanks for today!
Have a wonderful day ahead!
See you again! Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Describe something you could never give away and why.
I know that basics of cleaning is giving away but I can do it easy.
>> I know that the basics of cleaning is giving away but I cannot do it easily.
>> or: I know that the basics of cleaning is to give away but I cannot do it easily.
This is because I think that I will use it again.
>> correct!
>> or: It is because I am thinking that I can use it again.
However it is few so I try to give away somthings when I clean my house such as clothes, box and so on.
>> correct! (some things)
>> or: However, there are only a few so I am trying to give them away when I clean the house such as clothes, boxes and so on.
When I was young, I likeed writing a letter so there were a lot of letters in my house.
>> correct!
It was like my treasure but my grandmother give away them.
>> correct!
I\'m so sad at the thought.
>> correct!
Before marriage, we had exvhanged a letter.
>> Before getting married, me and my husband exchanged some letters.
Maybe letter was begining of dating.
>> Maybe the letter was the beginning of our date.
I can\'t give away it.
>> correct!
If I can show it to my kids, I will do it.
>> correct!
We can\'t buy it anywhere.
>> correct!
It is precious.
>> correct!
I also have many dairy of memories.
>> I also have many diaries of my memories.
In my case, I can get rid of my stress while writing something.
>> correct!
I need to clean my house for spring.
>> I need to clean my house for the spring season.
I should check whether giving away or not. Thank you.
>> I should check what to give away or not. Thank you.
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