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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. It's already April. It's getting hot. I come to spend the weekend, My works making a sea of report so I'm swimming the sea of my work. But I'm happy. I'm thinking positive it and I will finish all of them today... :( GEEZ... kkk Today's topic is "Why do people say laughter is the best medicine?" I saw the one of the news article that "Although making forced smile, that is produced the Dopamine in brain and that make to be happy emotionally and scientifically" I think the positive and smiling person looks like always happy. One of my favorite words is "We don't laugh because we're happy, we're happy because we laugh" Although monday, but you also make smile. :) And see you tomorrow. Bye ~

강사 첨삭

Hi there!Happy first day of the week!How was your weekend? I am hoping that you maximized your time to have fun. Whew! Tomorrow we\'ll be starting a brand new month, April. I hope that you will be having a good and exciting April.The effort that you put in completing your homework deserves a high five!^^We need to be positive all the time regardless of the problems and trials we are going through. Always put a smile on your face! I will see you tomorrow in class then! =) Teacher Chelsea :)     Hi Chelsea.>> Hi Chelsea,It\'s already April. It\'s getting hot. >> It\'s already April. It\'s getting hotter.I come to spend the weekend, My works making a sea of report so I\'m swimming the sea of my work. >> DID YOU MEAN: I spent my weekend doing reports for my work. It\'s like I\'m swimming in a sea of work.But I\'m happy. I\'m thinking positive it and I will finish all of them today... :( GEEZ... kkk>> But I\'m happy. I\'m thinking positively that I will finish them all today.Today\'s topic is \"Why do people say laughter is the best medicine?\">> CORRECT =)I saw the one of the news article that \"Although making forced smile, that is produced the Dopamine in brain and that make to be happy emotionally and scientifically\">> I read the news article that says \"Brain produces a certain hormone called Dopamine which makes us happy physically and emotionally.\"I think the positive and smiling person looks like always happy.>> I think that person who always smiles and who always thinks positively looks happy.One of my favorite words is \"We don\'t laugh because we\'re happy, we\'re happy because we laugh\">> One of my favorite passages says \"We don\'t laugh because we\'re happy, we\'re happy because we laugh.\"Although monday, but you also make smile. :)>> Although it\'s Monday, you still have to smile.And see you tomorrow. Bye ~ >> See you tomorrow. Bye.

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