Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. mobile phone is very useful in our life and it makes easy to talk with someone.
2. Most latest mobile phone can use internet, DMB, game and many nother thing.
3. The electronics use semiconductor and it's units are Bit, Bytes, Kilobytes. Megabytes. Gigabytes. Terabyte. Petabyte.
4. When we make camera we need lots of lens and many scientific knowledge.
5. The radios have to get complete destruction then people can listen.
6. When the people use mobile phone the surface have to sleek because it looks good adn it make feel good.
7. Comeputers have lots of functional so we cam use many program in the comeputer.
8. Lightweight(I don't understand)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank so much for doing your best every time in our classes. I really admire you for your efforts. Take care!
-Verna-
1. mobile phone is very useful in our life and it makes easy to talk with someone.>>Mobile phone is very useful in our lives and it easier to talk with someone.2. Most latest mobile phone can use internet, DMB, game and many nother thing.>>The latest mobile phone can use internet, DMB, game and many other thing.3. The electronics use semiconductor and it's units are Bit, Bytes, Kilobytes. Megabytes. Gigabytes. Terabyte. Petabyte.>>The electronics use semiconductor and the units are Bit, Bytes, Kilobyte, Megabytes, Gigabytes, Terabyte, and Petabyte.4. When we make camera we need lots of lens and many scientific knowledge.>>When we make a camera we need lots of lens and much scientific knowledge.5. The radios have to get complete destruction then people can listen.>>The radios have to get complete attention so that people can listen.6. When the people use mobile phone the surface have to sleek because it looks good adn it make feel good.>>When the people use mobile phone the surface have to be sleek because it looks good and it feels good.7. Comeputers have lots of functional so we cam use many program in the comeputer.
>> Computers have lots of functions so we can use many programs in the computer.8. Lightweight(I don't understand)
>> I can't understand lightweight.
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