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Both Facebook and Twitter are famous in Korea.
But my friends use Facebook more than Twitter.
Through Facebook, you could get in touch with your old friends.
So I think Facebook would do a role to reunite friends.
I did Facebook before, but I don't do it now.
You could get the news of your friends through Facebook, however sometimes Facebook can be used as
a tool to brag out oneself.
For example, there are some people who upload their grades.
And I wasn't the only one who felt this way.
bye:)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
A pleasant morning to you as always.. :)
Yeah, you\'re right!! There are really some netizens who do not have netiquette in
posting things online. It\'s unavoidable because it\'s actually one of the pros and cons
of our modern age. All we can do is not to do the same to ourselves. ^^ I hope I am making sense to you. kkk
I am also one of those millions of people who are subscribing in Facebook because it\'s my way of reconnecting
with people I don\'t usually get to see very often especially those who are out of the country. :)
However, I know how control my posts and I limit it since a lot of my former students are reading it too. haha!
Hmm, speaking of social networking sites, if you want to go on communicating with me as a friend and not a teacher
anymore just let me know any of your contacts like your email or Kakaotalk ID. ^^
Have a wonderful day to you~~
T.Kristel-
Both Facebook and Twitter are famous in Korea.
>> CORRECT!!But my friends use Facebook more than Twitter.
>> CORRECT!!Through Facebook, you could get in touch with your old friends.
>> CORRECT!!So I think Facebook would do a role to reunite friends.
>> CORRECT!!I did Facebook before, but I don\'t do it now.
>> CORRECT!!You could get the news of your friends through Facebook, however sometimes Facebook can be used asa tool to brag out oneself.
>> You could get the news of your friends through Facebook, however sometimes Facebook can be used asa tool to brag oneself.For example, there are some people who upload their grades.
>> CORRECT!!And I wasn\'t the only one who felt this way.
>> CORRECT!!bye:)
>> CORRECT!!
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