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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking your time to post your composition.
Thank you also for expressing your ideas and opinion about this topic and I really agree with your answers.
I made some corrections and hope that I was able to meet your points.
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Teacher Nina^^
They are from an aquarium that was shipped from Florida.
>> Correct!
So, the fishes are limited.
>> Correct!
So, I will breed them as much as possible.
>> In this case, I will breed them as much as possible.
I always talk to my fishes and say, \"Hello\" And then, Ihave a peace of mind.
>> I always talk to my fishes. I say, \"Hello\" and then, I have peace of mind.
This trait will help me to become a Bilogist.
>> This trait will help me to become a Biologist.
It is because a Biologist should think and love all living things.
>> It is because a biologist should think and love all living things.
I want to have a big fish tank, breed a lot of corals and fishes when I grow older.
>> I want to have a big fish tank, where I will be able breed a lot of corals and fishes when I grow older.
So, I won\'t make a mistake in order for them to die because I don\'t know a lot of things about it.
>> So, I won\'t make a mistake that would cause them to die because I don\'t know a lot of things about them.
Thank you for listening to my speech.
>> Correct!
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