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2014-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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Hi Chelsea, I just had a conversation with successful global team in internet communicator. Wow I was very nervous, but now I'm feel very satisfied :) I will do my best more to a fluent in English. kkk Anyway today's topic is "How can the internet help you learn English? Do you take advantage of this?". Yes, I had a many many take advantage of Internet. I can search some word that I don't know mean and I can make the sentence that I can't remember that meaning frame. I usually use the Google Translate. I can't make a perfect sentence yet. I'm getting a little helpful. Someday, I hope that i can make a perfect sentence without the Google translator. So please hlep me :) i will finish this. See you tomorrow with smile :) Bye ~

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Wow Good job for you, you tried talking to them in English. I feel so greatful for you because you are very well satisfied on your performance. Well, that\'s the spirit! stay positive and I know you can do it.

Anyways, Back to the topic, I already made some corrections on your homework. it\'s really nice to see that you are trying to construct a perfect sentence. and that Internet helps a lot on your part. But still don\'t be dependent on the internet, Be confident that you can do it, just keep practicing and enjoy what you\'re doing. ^^,

 

Teacher Chelsea

 

Hi Chelsea,

>>CORRECT
I just had a conversation with successful global team in internet communicator.
>>I just had a conversation with a successful global team in internet communication.

Wow I was very nervous, but now I\'m feel very satisfied :)

>>Wow I was very nervous at that time but I feel great and very satisfied on my performance.
I will do my best more to a fluent in English. kkk
>>I will do my best more to be fluent in English.

Anyway today\'s topic is \"How can the internet help you learn English? Do you take advantage of this?\".
>>CORRECT
Yes, I had a many many take advantage of Internet.
>>Yes, the internet have many advantages with regards to learning English..

I can search some word that I don\'t know mean and I can make the sentence that I can\'t remember that meaning frame.
>>I can search unfamiliar words and I can construct a sentence with the help of the internet.

I usually use the Google Translate.
>>I usually use the Google translator.
I can\'t make a perfect sentence yet. I\'m getting a little helpful.
>>I still have hard time constructing a sentence, but with the use of the internet, it helps a lot. 
Someday, I hope that i can make a perfect sentence without the Google translator.
>>Someday, I hope I can make a perfect sentence without the help of Goggle Translator.
So please hlep me :)
>>So please help me on this.
i will finish this.

>>I know I will finish this.

See you tomorrow with smile :) Bye ~
>>CORRECT

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