homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi,
Wow Good job for you, you tried talking to them in English. I feel so greatful for you because you are very well satisfied on your performance. Well, that\'s the spirit! stay positive and I know you can do it.
Anyways, Back to the topic, I already made some corrections on your homework. it\'s really nice to see that you are trying to construct a perfect sentence. and that Internet helps a lot on your part. But still don\'t be dependent on the internet, Be confident that you can do it, just keep practicing and enjoy what you\'re doing. ^^,
Teacher Chelsea
Hi Chelsea,
>>CORRECT
I just had a conversation with successful global team in internet communicator.
>>I just had a conversation with a successful global team in internet communication.
Wow I was very nervous, but now I\'m feel very satisfied :)
>>Wow I was very nervous at that time but I feel great and very satisfied on my performance.
I will do my best more to a fluent in English. kkk
>>I will do my best more to be fluent in English.
Anyway today\'s topic is \"How can the internet help you learn English? Do you take advantage of this?\".
>>CORRECT
Yes, I had a many many take advantage of Internet.
>>Yes, the internet have many advantages with regards to learning English..
I can search some word that I don\'t know mean and I can make the sentence that I can\'t remember that meaning frame.
>>I can search unfamiliar words and I can construct a sentence with the help of the internet.
I usually use the Google Translate.
>>I usually use the Google translator.
I can\'t make a perfect sentence yet. I\'m getting a little helpful.
>>I still have hard time constructing a sentence, but with the use of the internet, it helps a lot.
Someday, I hope that i can make a perfect sentence without the Google translator.
>>Someday, I hope I can make a perfect sentence without the help of Goggle Translator.
So please hlep me :)
>>So please help me on this.
i will finish this.
>>I know I will finish this.
See you tomorrow with smile :) Bye ~
>>CORRECT
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