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2014-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Though I'm having a exhausting week because of my homework, I do NOT look forward to the weekend this time. To me, it's too sad that time flew so fast. I think you might know the reason as well.ㅠㅠ And I definitely DO DO DO want to go on communicating with you!!! It's a sure thing!!:) Here is my e-mail: minjeong[이름]@naver.com Actually I was about to ask you your e-mail and I really appreciate you asked me first.:) And about the subject you gave me, I usually buy something practical for my friends. Something that my friend can use very often. For example, I gave a lot of pretty and cute looking notebooks to my friend who went to China for studying. Because I heard that it's hard to find pretty ones in China. Speaking of China, does my Korean name Minjeong Jeong sound like Chinese name and does it sound funny? kkk Bye :) Have a great, sweet, energetic, wonderful, beautiful day, Kristel:)

강사 첨삭

My ever sweet, [이름]!!! I am deeply moved by this composition. Right now, I am feeling mixed emotions because I am certainly happy and sure of my decision to stop working here to take some time to rest and work on my own instead, however, I am deeply saddened leaving my students and colleagues here because I am definitely going to miss everyone. On the other hand, I have to be grateful that I had the opportunity to get to know you here. We only knew each other for some time but it feels like forever. In addition, I really appreciate everything you did to keep my class. I almost lost you here, remember?kkk There are a lot of memories to remember. Anyway, don\'t worry we\'ll keep communicating as long as you don\'t write me off! Have a wonderful and fun day~~ T.Kristel- Though I\'m having a exhausting week because of my homework, I do NOT look forward to the weekend this time. >> Though I\'m having an exhausting week because of my homework, I do NOT look forward to the weekend this time.To me, it\'s too sad that time flew so fast. >> CORRECT!!I think you might know the reason as well.ㅠㅠ >> CORRECT!!And I definitely DO DO DO want to go on communicating with you!!! It\'s a sure thing!!:) >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!Here is my e-mail: minjeong[이름]@naver.com >> CORRECT!!Actually I was about to ask you your e-mail and I really appreciate you asked me first.:) >> CORRECT!!And about the subject you gave me, I usually buy something practical for my friends. >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Something that my friend can use very often. >> CORRECT!!For example, I gave a lot of pretty and cute looking notebooks to my friend who went to China for studying. >> CORRECT!!Because I heard that it\'s hard to find pretty ones in China. >> CORRECT!!Speaking of China, does my Korean name Minjeong Jeong sound like Chinese name and does it sound funny? kkk >> CORRECT!!Bye :) Have a great, sweet, energetic, wonderful, beautiful day, Kristel:) >> CORRECT!! CORRECT!!

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