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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: Which would you choose - a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and examples. - In my opinion, i prefer to choose a lower-paying job with shorter hours. I seek happy and comfortable life. Of course, if i have a lot of money, it would be good for my buget, however, the life cannot be dominated only with money. I earn a lot of money, but if i have no time for spending money? it would be useless. I value spending more time with people around me. It can make me feel pleasant, it is priceless. And also, it is important to have my own time which allows me to enjoy my hobby and practice self-improvement. For all of these things to be done, i need to have my own free time.

Hello there! Thank you for expressing your thoughts. Indeed, personal time is very important. Anyway, I made some corrections to some of your sentences. Please remember that the pronoun \"I\" should be capitalized. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: Which would you choose - a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and examples. In my opinion, i prefer to choose a lower-paying job with shorter hours.>> I prefer to choose a lower-paying job with shorter hours.I seek happy and comfortable life.>> Correct!Of course, if i have a lot of money, it would be good for my buget, however, the life cannot be dominated only with money.>> Of course, if I have a lot of money, it would be good for my buget, however, life cannot be dominated by money alone.I earn a lot of money, but if i have no time for spending money? it would be useless.>> I earn a lot of money, but if I have no time for spending it, it would be useless. I value spending more time with people around me.>> I value spending more time with the people around me.It can make me feel pleasant, it is priceless.>> Correct!And also, it is important to have my own time which allows me to enjoy my hobby and practice self-improvement.>> Correct!For all of these things to be done, i need to have my own free time. >> For all of these things to be done, I need to have my own free time