homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Harry Potter.
Because I like to do a magic.
I sometimes want to be like Harry Potter.
Because it is great.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
I am happy to receive a composition from you today.
How are you? Did you have a fun day?
You did a marvelous job! Keep it up!
I also like Harry Potter. I collected some stickers and posters few years ago.
See you in class. Keep on writing!
I encourage you to write longer essays.^^ You can do it!Teacher Nina
I like Harry Potter.
>> Correct Because I like to do a magic.
>> Because I like to do magic.
>> OR: Because I like to do magic tricks. I sometimes want to be like Harry Potter.
>> Correct Because it is great.
>> Correct
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